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Charles Monroe
Harriate-L-Riddle
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Harriate-L-Riddle

Harriate-L-Riddle


Female Number of posts : 1706
Age : 33
Location : Anywhere i can live.
House : Slytherin
Year : 7th
Registration date : 2007-07-26

Character
Name: Harriate Riddle
Health:
Lovers Death Left_bar_bleue60/100Lovers Death Empty_bar_bleue  (60/100)
Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Confused

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PostSubject: Lovers Death   Lovers Death Icon_minitimeWed Aug 22, 2007 5:13 pm

((more like a song about an rp))

he was the one man
My heart ever yearned for
His smile lit my heart
His arms safe and secure
But now within this office
I feel my heart break
As i'm told that he is gone
Dead, killed by my 'father'

*chorus*
Lovers Death
My only love in all the world
His eyes are glazed
Forever closed
My 'father' arrested
For the murder of love
As i stand on the edge of the cliff
Lost and alone again.

And now as i stand
infront of this Gravestone
I feel the damn break
As the tears roll down my face.
Crashing down onto my knees
With a broken heart
I look at his grave
His final resting place.

*chorus*



So what do i do now?
Where do i go?
Do i save my 'father'?
Or avenge my love?
And as my father is dragged away
i know what i must do
So up i stand
to take the blame
Lies slip past my lips so easily
with any luck my 'father' will be free
and i'll be jailed for all etenrity

*chorus*


So this is the end
I've lost everyone
my 'Father' free
my love dead
my 'aunty' hates me
my secret, feeling betrayed
as i stand here now
telling you
of all the loss of love
the loss of life
My Loss
My Lovers Death


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Charles Monroe

Charles Monroe


Male Number of posts : 342
Age : 31
Location : Unknown
House : Gryffindor
Year : 5th
Registration date : 2007-08-15

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Health:
Lovers Death Left_bar_bleue0/0Lovers Death Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
Order/ Death Eater/ Da:

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PostSubject: Re: Lovers Death   Lovers Death Icon_minitimeWed Aug 22, 2007 8:34 pm

wow amazing, your good at writing Very Happy okie like it even more now Smile
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Pandora Gryffindor
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Pandora Gryffindor


Female Number of posts : 519
Age : 49
Location : Godrics Hollow with Remus
House : Gryffindor
Year : Headmistress/Potions Prof./Order Member
Registration date : 2007-07-27

Character
Name: Pandora Gryffindor
Health:
Lovers Death Left_bar_bleue100/100Lovers Death Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Order

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PostSubject: Re: Lovers Death   Lovers Death Icon_minitimeWed Aug 22, 2007 8:44 pm

Great Job...loved it!
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Jasmine Granger

Jasmine Granger


Female Number of posts : 3093
Age : 36
Location : Slytherin Dungeons/Jasmine's Apartment/Wolf Demon Temple
House : Slytherin
Registration date : 2007-07-26

Character
Name: Jasmine Elizabeth Granger
Health:
Lovers Death Left_bar_bleue15/100Lovers Death Empty_bar_bleue  (15/100)
Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Death Eater/ Wolf Demon

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PostSubject: Re: Lovers Death   Lovers Death Icon_minitimeThu Aug 23, 2007 4:36 am

It's so beautiful, passionate, emotional, poetic, and sad. It brought tears to my eyes. Crying or Very sad I loved it, Harriate. You are such a good writer. Lama
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Harriate-L-Riddle

Harriate-L-Riddle


Female Number of posts : 1706
Age : 33
Location : Anywhere i can live.
House : Slytherin
Year : 7th
Registration date : 2007-07-26

Character
Name: Harriate Riddle
Health:
Lovers Death Left_bar_bleue60/100Lovers Death Empty_bar_bleue  (60/100)
Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Confused

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PostSubject: Re: Lovers Death   Lovers Death Icon_minitimeThu Aug 23, 2007 1:36 pm

Thanks.lol. made me cry to.
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Annabelle lestrange

Annabelle lestrange


Female Number of posts : 494
Age : 32
Location : England
House : Slytherin
Registration date : 2007-07-26

Character
Name: Annabelle Lestrange
Health:
Lovers Death Left_bar_bleue60/100Lovers Death Empty_bar_bleue  (60/100)
Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Death eater

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PostSubject: Re: Lovers Death   Lovers Death Icon_minitimeThu Aug 23, 2007 3:08 pm

Woaaaah that was beautifull. I agree with Jasmine. It made me cry. It really powerfull and emotional.
Well done.
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Harriate-L-Riddle

Harriate-L-Riddle


Female Number of posts : 1706
Age : 33
Location : Anywhere i can live.
House : Slytherin
Year : 7th
Registration date : 2007-07-26

Character
Name: Harriate Riddle
Health:
Lovers Death Left_bar_bleue60/100Lovers Death Empty_bar_bleue  (60/100)
Order/ Death Eater/ Da: Confused

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PostSubject: Re: Lovers Death   Lovers Death Icon_minitimeThu Aug 23, 2007 3:12 pm

Thanks.lol. First song ive done with no rhyming in mind.lol. Not one of my favs though
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Rose-Quattro

Rose-Quattro


Female Number of posts : 1349
Location : The Swallows, Llagollen (Wales) or Hogwarts...
House : Ravenclaw
Year : 5th
Registration date : 2007-08-19

Character
Name: Rose Ligeia Quattromini
Health:
Lovers Death Left_bar_bleue17/100Lovers Death Empty_bar_bleue  (17/100)
Order/ Death Eater/ Da: I haven't decided yet.

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PostSubject: Re: Lovers Death   Lovers Death Icon_minitimeThu Aug 23, 2007 5:05 pm

It's pretty good...me likey! Thay were right when they told me you were good at writing!
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